Sunday, 6 October 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors #37


Hi Everyone and welcome to another eight sentences! This will be my last visit to 'Dancing for the Boys' and the story within 'A Private Dance.' Tanya has just finished dancing for James and his cronies at his home. Her eyes lock onto James as the music stops:

My Eight:

His eyes were hot and hungry. Tanya knew she had surpassed all his expectations. The dance was personal. Slowly she pulled herself up to her feet and bowed low to the grinning men.
Somebody ushered them from the room but James remained. He walked slowly towards her, dampness on his upper lip.
“You were amazing.” he breathed.

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18 comments:

  1. Cara Bristol6 October 2013 at 14:18

    Have enjoyed these snippets. What's next?

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  2. J. A. Hornbuckle6 October 2013 at 14:24

    Yummy with the damp upper lip. Good eight, Gemma!

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  3. Lauren6 October 2013 at 15:12

    ow wow! This scene is so short but so packed with sensual with promise. I can't wait to see what happens next!

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  4. Linda6 October 2013 at 15:16

    She did a great job, but I have the feeling that he is going to want a lot more from her.

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  5. Charmaine Gordon6 October 2013 at 15:53

    Hot and hungry are the key words here. Good eight! Wow.
    Since I posted today and yet forgot to sign up, pls check last weeks list and hit todays date. OMG! Too fragmented to think straight. Thanks.

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  6. Susan Stuckey6 October 2013 at 16:49

    Beautiful description and as someone above mention - certainly packed with all kinds of "promises" of things in the future. Only nit I had is I don't think you need the word "up" in the 4th sentence. Great #8.

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  7. gemma parkes6 October 2013 at 17:08

    Thank you all for your comments! Susan I think you might be right about the 'up'! Surplus to requirements.

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  8. A.S. Fenichel6 October 2013 at 17:35

    Wonderful eight. Loved how clearly I could see the look shared between the. Nice job!

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  9. Veronica Scott6 October 2013 at 18:39

    Oh yes, he's hooked all right. I'm sure even more interesting developments will follow. This has been a fun story - another terrific snippet today!

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  10. Unknown6 October 2013 at 19:25

    she's caught his attention with her dance. good snippet. it leaves us needing to know what happens next

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  11. S.J. Maylee6 October 2013 at 20:22

    She's got him all hot and bothered. I love it. Definitely intriguing.

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  12. Anonymous6 October 2013 at 21:57

    I like the use of 'somebody' referring to the person ushering the other men from the room--it's a good reminder that she's focused on James--and he's focused on her.

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  13. Anonymous7 October 2013 at 01:01

    Must have been a very hot dance if he's sweating ;). Nice 8! I wonder what happens next, since they now have the room all to themselves ;)

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  14. Heather Boyd7 October 2013 at 10:25

    Wow. She must have rocked his world. Great 8!

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  15. Unknown7 October 2013 at 15:27

    Sultry and smooth! Great 8! :D

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  16. Beth Matthews8 October 2013 at 02:26

    Well now we need to know what happens next! :)

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  17. Teresa Cypher9 October 2013 at 20:03

    Mood setter: "...he breathed." Nicely done :-) !

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  18. Anonymous13 October 2013 at 12:21

    A great eight there.

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