Sunday, 11 January 2015

Weekend Writing Warriors #97


Hi and welcome to this week's eight sentences.
I am going to continue from last week with 'Dancing for the Boys' enjoy!:                                           

                 MY EIGHT

The man was immaculate, the club had a dress code so all the men were smart, but this man was truly immaculate. He looked like a man of importance, affluent and in complete control of his life. The way he sat, the small sips of brandy he drank, the fact that he never ever smiled all pointed to someone different from the rest. Tanya towelled herself dry, slipped on a cobalt blue dress with matching shoes and headed down to the small bar leading off from the performance room.
“Put your purse away Tanya love,” said Tony the barman, “This drinks on the gentleman over there.”
He gestured with his head towards the other end of the bar where Tanya expected to see one of the many admirers that tried to get to know her better after every show. But to her surprise it was the man in grey. He nodded his head holding up his glass but didn’t smile and made no attempt to approach her.


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Who doesn’t love to dance? Who doesn’t love to tease the men watching, willing them to notice and lust after your body? What would you do if you were given the chance to perform before a group of appreciative gentlemen for a large amount of money? The latest release from the pen of Gemma Parkes combines two stories of exotic dancing and what it means to two women when they truly perform.

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  1. Wow! What a great snippet. Descriptions superb and now to find out what happens next.

  2. Great eight, sounds like an intriguing man!

  3. Oh my! The build-up is coming. Can't wait to find out more about the man in grey suit. ;)

  4. Ohhh, the man in grey...tell me more;). Great 8.

  5. He's mysterious, isn't he? I wonder what he wants...

  6. The mystery man...intriguing, Gemma. You've done a good job of setting that up. :-) !

  7. The mystery man isn't in a hurry to declare himself. Hmm.

  8. The man in the gray suit sounds like he's going to be harder for her to deal with than the ordinary customer...should be fascinating to read. Excellent excerpt!