Sunday, 4 January 2015

Weekend Writing Warriors #96

Hi and welcome to the first eight sentences of 2015. I hope that you all enjoyed the holiday season and that 2015 will be a successful one for you and your families.
I am going to start the year with eight sentences from 'Dancing for the Boys' enjoy!:                                           

                 MY EIGHT

Tanya ended another perfect routine with a back curl stretch tilting her head so that all her pretty auburn curls tumbled behind her. She held this position for 5 seconds as rapturous applause filled her ears and resonated around the four dark walls of Brady’s club. Slowly she pulled herself to her feet using the sleek, chrome pole, her partner in dance, and bowed her head to her audience. A quick scan of the right hand side of the stage told her He was here again and her heart fluttered as it always did in his presence. With a final bow Tanya turned on her heels and left the stage.
The refreshing water from the shower soothed her skin, warm and clammy after her performance. This was her fourth night this week and every night the man in the charcoal grey suit was in the audience. Of course he might not have been here just to see Tanya, he probably wasn’t, but there was something about the way he held her gaze after every performance that unnerved her.


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Who doesn’t love to dance? Who doesn’t love to tease the men watching, willing them to notice and lust after your body? What would you do if you were given the chance to perform before a group of appreciative gentlemen for a large amount of money? The latest release from the pen of Gemma Parkes combines two stories of exotic dancing and what it means to two women when they truly perform.

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  1. I like this scene. Can't go wrong with a sexy stripper story.

  2. Delicious, Gemma. You captured this reader from the first sentence and the description is wonderful. Then there's the man adding a an element of suspense. Terrific eight.

  3. Love the description flow. Yummy, another man in a grey suit. Nicely done!

  4. I hope the man's interest is positive and not negative.Nice way to add suspense.

  5. Really enjoyed the excerpt and I agree with Elaine about how skillfully you've added an element of suspense for us. Great 8!