Sunday, 5 October 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors #84

       Hi and welcome to this week's Eight sentences. Today I am continuing with eight from my new release, 'Fevered Kisses' an anthology of lust. This week I am continuing from last week and fifth story 'Some Time Away'. 

                                  MY EIGHT:
Wake up? Somewhere, deep inside Melanie’s anxious brain something changed. Her mind began to fill with a clarity she hadn’t felt in a very long time. With one swift movement she turned the Mercedes down a small road to her right, gesturing with one finger her departure from the jam.
When Melanie reached the end of the road she headed back towards the town centre and the connections to the motorway. The traffic was much less troublesome in this direction and she was soon sliding the gear stick into fifth and settling back into her seat as she joined the motorway traffic heading north.
The air was now cooler as the car cruised at a higher speed, it felt refreshing against her face and she smiled. Where shall l go? 


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 Six sizzling stories in an anthology of lust from the pen of Gemma Parkes:
·        A notebook carelessly left behind reveals secret liaisons of a most intimate nature.
·        An insatiable woman bites off far more than she can chew when four is certainly not a crowd.
·        Sometimes life is just too darn hot but could cooling down heat things up further?
·        Fevered kisses lead to daring thrills for one hungry couple.
Also, what happens when erotic fantasies occupy too much of your time? Lay back and lose yourself in the sensual mind of one of England’s most imaginative storytellers. Adults only.

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  1. Escape! The tension eased as she broke from the expected and began a journey in the opposite direction.

  2. Very smooth description. Feel like I'm on the road with her.

  3. Very interesting 8! I am really curious to see where she came from and where she's going. Great snippet!

  4. Looks like she's made an important decision. I am dying to find out who she is and where she is going to now. Well done.

  5. Driving can be very liberating sometimes.

  6. I'm betting she's off to a grand adventure. I like the sense of freedom and escape.

  7. Nothing like a long drive with a clear road. I enjoyed the description of her frame of mind - great snippet!

  8. Yes, break away from the crowd! Now that she's free of the traffic, what else is bogging down her life that she can get rid of?

  9. Off, untethered, to a new adventure! Nicely written, Gemma. :-)

  10. where will she go? Nothing like cruising away from the headache of traffic.

  11. Where shall I go indeed? What adventure is just around the bend?

  12. Love the sense of freedom you finish with!

  13. Yes, freedom fills the eight and dreams of hope are with her. Lovely.

  14. There is a great sense of escape :)