Hello Everyone, here we go with another eight sentences! I am continuing 'Pleasing Mia' I have moved forward just a few sentences and Scot is getting ready for his date with Mia:
MY EIGHT
Dixie’s was
well-known locally for its vast selection of cocktails, some of which were
exclusive. This was not a place that Scott frequented and the thought of
meeting Mia there only added to the inner pressure he already felt about their rendezvous.
Mia had
requested that they meet inside saying she wanted to make her own way there.
Scott had spent a long time preparing for their date as the venue required him
to be immaculately groomed. His black hair was gelled to sleek perfection and
his toned body lightly splashed with expensive scent. He wanted Mia to want him
as much as he ached for her. Scott also wanted Mia to be proud to be seen with
him. Smart black trousers and maroon Indian cotton Ralph Lauren shirt finished
his look. He searched through his small collection of
office ties, but in the end, decided against wearing one.
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Synopsis:
On a weekend visit to a local nightclub, Scott, a quiet, good looking man, sets his eyes on a beautiful girl dancing with complete abandonment on the dance floor. Everybody is watching her, though she seems oblivious to any attention she is receiving. The girl (Mia) is simply lost in the music.
When eventually circumstances lead her to succumb to his quiet charm Scott discovers Mia’s wild sexual nature is not restricted to the dance floor. As he struggles to keep up with her sexual prowess and ever changing moods Scott discovers a side of himself that he had not deemed possible. Pleasing Mia is by no means an easy accomplishment. Will Scott succeed?
He's going over board to please. Usually it's the other way around. Nice decription of Scott preparing for his date, Gemma.
ReplyDeleteI love how you describe Scott's appearance. I'm interested to know how his date will go. Though you misspelled Ralph Loren - should be Ralph Lauren. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteYou paint a very vivid and tempting picture of Scott's appearance. I hope she doesn't let him down. He's looked forward to this for so long! Good 8, Gemma!
ReplyDeleteAw, he's nervous! So sweet!!
ReplyDeleteHe is anxious to please, Mia. That is very clear.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the excerpt, usually we read how the lady is getting ready so this was a nice change! I appreciated all his thought and effort.
ReplyDeleteSo cute to see a man worried about making the right impression. Stories usually give us the girls points of view in this area.
ReplyDeleteMmm, I love the sound of him all GQed up for his date. Hey, if it doesn't work out with her, my door is always open. lol. Great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteHe's really spiffing himself up, although he could lose the hair gel for my tastes. Of course, he isn't trying to please me, but Mia.
ReplyDeleteHow fun that he's thinking this through. What a yummy visual your description presents, too :D
ReplyDeleteQuite the build up of anticipation! I know I got a visual. ")
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What a delightful twist, we usually get the gal's POV getting ready for a date. This obviously means a lot to him. Great description.
ReplyDeleteWow! This guys got it bad. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteCause every girls crazy 'bout a sharp dressed man. Women just don't know the pains men go through when dressing to impress. We are like budgies with a mirror when no one is looking.
ReplyDeleteLove the descriptions! So glad you decided to skip the tie. :)
ReplyDeleteNicely setting the scene with describing how much effort he put into getting ready for the date. This guy wants to impress!
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