Hi and welcome to this week's eight sentences. I am sharing 8 more from 'Pleasing Mia'. Scott has just entered the wine bar to meet Mia.
MY EIGHT:
Scott noted a
couple of glances from admiring, suitably dressed females as he walked into the
wine bar, a sideways glance into an impressive chrome wall-length mirror confirmed
the reason why. He was smoking!
Mia was sat at
the bar, high up and beautifully poised on a leather and chrome stool. She was
sipping a colourful cocktail. Her midnight blue, silk dress clung to her body,
falling away at the knees to reveal long naked legs, shapely ankles and
beautiful dainty feet encased in blue stilettos the exact same shade as her
dress. The top of her dress was carefully shaped to make the most of her modest
cleavage.
She had tamed her blonde tresses for the evening, they
were straightened into a golden sheen falling obediently over her shoulders and
just covering her breasts. Scott noticed Mia’s nails, which were also painted a
high shine, midnight blue.
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Synopsis:
On a weekend visit to a local nightclub, Scott, a quiet, good looking man, sets his eyes on a beautiful girl dancing with complete abandonment on the dance floor. Everybody is watching her, though she seems oblivious to any attention she is receiving. The girl (Mia) is simply lost in the music.
When eventually circumstances lead her to succumb to his quiet charm Scott discovers Mia’s wild sexual nature is not restricted to the dance floor. As he struggles to keep up with her sexual prowess and ever changing moods Scott discovers a side of himself that he had not deemed possible. Pleasing Mia is by no means an easy accomplishment. Will Scott succeed?
Good descriptions, Gemma. Funny how he looked in a mirror and thought he was Smoking Hot!
ReplyDeleteHe's a bit conceited. LOL. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteWonderful descriptions of Mia. I would consider adding a colon at the end of the first paragraph; the reason why: He was smoking. Just thought I'd point that out. Good 8!
ReplyDeleteHa, Yes, I think he's just trying to reassure himself that he looks good! Meeting Mia is a daunting thought, thanks for commenting!
ReplyDeleteI love how much we learn about him with just the one line, "He was smoking!" It sorta says it all on several levels... ;-) Nice 8, Gemma!
ReplyDeleteI love all the blue in her outfit, lovely details. Excellent excerpt, can't wait for whatever comes next!
ReplyDeleteGreat description of Mia. I love her coordinated outfit -- even blue nail polish! I wonder what that tells us about the character.
ReplyDelete(Since this book has already been published, I imagine this was just a typo in today's post: Mia WAS SAT at the bar)
Great description, I can picture her perfectly!
ReplyDeleteGotta love his confidence! Or maybe he's just trying to get up the guts to talk to her. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteIf only we could all be as put-together as our heroines. Nice description.
ReplyDeleteFantastic description, Gemma. And I chuckled when I read "He was smoking!" lol--great character building there!
ReplyDeleteGood 8 :-)
She's really put together, indeed. I can see why he'd feel the need to reassure himself that he matches her.
ReplyDeleteI had a chuckle when he thought how smoking hot he was. Conceited or overly confident, or just plain truthful. lol Enjoyed the snippet.
ReplyDeleteGreat details in this snippet! You learn a lot about both characters in the way they're put together. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSheesh, he's smoking all right, about to ignite into flames he's so hot for her. :D
ReplyDeleteOoo, fantastic details. You paint a sexy picture. :)
ReplyDeleteA funny touch that he caught his reflection and thought very highly of himself. I very much enjoyed your description of Mia... she sounds like a seductress in a noir film. Very hot!
ReplyDeleteSound like a couple of sexy beasts : ) Nice details, I could picture her in my mind.
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