tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post3471368850558206344..comments2023-10-21T10:57:21.619+01:00Comments on Gemma Parkes: Living and Loving with A Passion!: Weekend Writing Warriors #58gemma parkeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-67098452208584737792014-03-15T23:03:54.031+00:002014-03-15T23:03:54.031+00:00Sound like a couple of sexy beasts : ) Nice detai...Sound like a couple of sexy beasts : ) Nice details, I could picture her in my mind.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-87071225088831121242014-03-15T10:54:44.217+00:002014-03-15T10:54:44.217+00:00A funny touch that he caught his reflection and th...A funny touch that he caught his reflection and thought very highly of himself. I very much enjoyed your description of Mia... she sounds like a seductress in a noir film. Very hot!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-32313248032331340642014-03-13T19:53:17.944+00:002014-03-13T19:53:17.944+00:00Ooo, fantastic details. You paint a sexy picture. ...Ooo, fantastic details. You paint a sexy picture. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-88145564806647307272014-03-10T14:06:40.216+00:002014-03-10T14:06:40.216+00:00Sheesh, he's smoking all right, about to ignit...Sheesh, he's smoking all right, about to ignite into flames he's so hot for her. :DGem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-39916450321097382522014-03-10T13:51:48.294+00:002014-03-10T13:51:48.294+00:00Great details in this snippet! You learn a lot abo...Great details in this snippet! You learn a lot about both characters in the way they're put together. Well done! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-20368893726358423792014-03-10T03:49:00.424+00:002014-03-10T03:49:00.424+00:00I had a chuckle when he thought how smoking hot he...I had a chuckle when he thought how smoking hot he was. Conceited or overly confident, or just plain truthful. lol Enjoyed the snippet. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-13758593761556498352014-03-10T00:30:52.457+00:002014-03-10T00:30:52.457+00:00She's really put together, indeed. I can see w...She's really put together, indeed. I can see why he'd feel the need to reassure himself that he matches her.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-26717935864974137172014-03-09T23:42:29.379+00:002014-03-09T23:42:29.379+00:00Fantastic description, Gemma. And I chuckled when ...Fantastic description, Gemma. And I chuckled when I read "He was smoking!" lol--great character building there!<br /><br />Good 8 :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-46105736086057545632014-03-09T18:53:40.556+00:002014-03-09T18:53:40.556+00:00If only we could all be as put-together as our her...If only we could all be as put-together as our heroines. Nice description.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-6257254923418924582014-03-09T18:15:14.245+00:002014-03-09T18:15:14.245+00:00Gotta love his confidence! Or maybe he's just ...Gotta love his confidence! Or maybe he's just trying to get up the guts to talk to her. Great snippet!diannehartsockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15874628384426574320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-81794674315408341052014-03-09T16:59:04.591+00:002014-03-09T16:59:04.591+00:00Great description, I can picture her perfectly!Great description, I can picture her perfectly!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-32359779553058869722014-03-09T16:31:46.534+00:002014-03-09T16:31:46.534+00:00Great description of Mia. I love her coordinated o...Great description of Mia. I love her coordinated outfit -- even blue nail polish! I wonder what that tells us about the character.<br />(Since this book has already been published, I imagine this was just a typo in today's post: Mia WAS SAT at the bar) Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-45879379292952230122014-03-09T16:11:11.771+00:002014-03-09T16:11:11.771+00:00I love all the blue in her outfit, lovely details....I love all the blue in her outfit, lovely details. Excellent excerpt, can't wait for whatever comes next!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-29754125581172548462014-03-09T15:34:50.436+00:002014-03-09T15:34:50.436+00:00I love how much we learn about him with just the o...I love how much we learn about him with just the one line, "He was smoking!" It sorta says it all on several levels... ;-) Nice 8, Gemma!Nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08809913527142033733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-30524794151519302572014-03-09T14:50:56.107+00:002014-03-09T14:50:56.107+00:00Ha, Yes, I think he's just trying to reassure ...Ha, Yes, I think he's just trying to reassure himself that he looks good! Meeting Mia is a daunting thought, thanks for commenting! gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-60799396029292589512014-03-09T14:48:48.564+00:002014-03-09T14:48:48.564+00:00Wonderful descriptions of Mia. I would consider ad...Wonderful descriptions of Mia. I would consider adding a colon at the end of the first paragraph; the reason why: He was smoking. Just thought I'd point that out. Good 8!Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-77214539110196014922014-03-09T14:27:23.582+00:002014-03-09T14:27:23.582+00:00He's a bit conceited. LOL. Great snippet!He's a bit conceited. LOL. Great snippet!A.S. Fenichelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188528705441184803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-68202914890224100732014-03-09T13:53:00.383+00:002014-03-09T13:53:00.383+00:00Good descriptions, Gemma. Funny how he looked in a...Good descriptions, Gemma. Funny how he looked in a mirror and thought he was Smoking Hot! Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.com