Sunday, 16 March 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors #59






Hi And welcome to this week's eight sentences. I am moving on with 'Pleasing Mia'. Scott has managed to get Mia to go home with him to his apartment:

MY EIGHT:


Scott drove straight to his apartment, excitement filling his body. Mia rested her hand on Scott’s thigh giving it a gentle squeeze through the thin material of his trousers. All was well in Scott’s world, he was happy beyond belief.
Once inside Scott dimmed the lights, put on some soul music and took Mia into his arms. Watching her face he began to peel her dress slowly from her body as she stood perfectly still. The Midnight blue theme had stretched to her underwear and took shape in a satin thong. Her breasts were free to present themselves to Scott’s admiring gaze. He breathed in their perfection with an appreciative sigh.
His hands began to caress her breasts, lifting them softly and stroking the silky smooth skin. Mia’s face glazed over and a small sigh escaped her lips. This was what Scott yearned for, her response to his touch. 

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Synopsis:
On a weekend visit to a local nightclub, Scott, a quiet, good looking man, sets his eyes on a beautiful girl dancing with complete abandonment on the dance floor. Everybody is watching her, though she seems oblivious to any attention she is receiving. The girl (Mia) is simply lost in the music.
When eventually circumstances lead her to succumb to his quiet charm Scott discovers Mia’s wild sexual nature is not restricted to the dance floor. As he struggles to keep up with her sexual prowess and ever changing moods Scott discovers a side of himself that he had not deemed possible. Pleasing Mia is by no means an easy accomplishment. Will Scott succeed?








17 comments:

  1. Beautifully detailed. Is it hot in here? ;D

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  2. Nice job with this. I like being in Scott's head for this story. He's a likeable guy and it's great to share his point of view.

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  3. Description too hot to handle. Scott is such a nice guy. I hope Mia is the right one for him.

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  4. Beautifully described. Glad Scott got what he wanted.

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  5. So nice that he is so determined to please her. Nice snippet.

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  6. Good snippet, Gemma! Very visual. Scott is almost there! :-)

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  7. Wow, sensual. I love the detail - terrific snippet!

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  8. His eagerness and lust are very clear in this scene.

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  9. He's really into her, and it shows!

    There's a lot of sighing going on close together, though. Even when the response is appropriate, that tends to jar my attention.

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  10. It's nice when both parties are pleasured : )

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  11. Nice job setting the mood and the scene. Great eight!

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  12. Lovely details here to get that scene going in our imaginations. Scott is smooth the lights dimming and soul music. And Mia's enjoying all of it, from her lovely sigh. A steamy snippet!

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  13. It seems that he is going to please her, finally.

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  14. Sweet and juicy and oh so fine descriptive and visually realized snippet. Bravo.

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