Sunday, 16 February 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors #56

Hi Everyone, welcome to this week's eight sentences. This week I am sharing more from 'Pleasing Mia', jumping forward just a few sentences, enjoy!


 Mia was just so difficult to talk to. Scott made small talk but Mia seemed distant, choosing to stare frequently out of the window at the passing shoppers. They left the cafe as soon as they had finished their drinks and parted company on the pavement. On one hand Scott was thrilled that he had an actual date with the girl of his dreams, but on the other it didn't feel like an actual date.
The next five days were a source of conflicting emotions. At night Mia filled Scott’s mind with lust and helped him to relieve his body of the built up passion he held for her. During the day he worried over her apparent distance and wondered why she was agreeing to meet him at all. By the time Friday came Scott was a nervous wreck.


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On a weekend visit to a local nightclub, Scott, a quiet, good looking man, sets his eyes on a beautiful girl dancing with complete abandonment on the dance floor. Everybody is watching her, though she seems oblivious to any attention she is receiving. The girl (Mia) is simply lost in the music.
When eventually circumstances lead her to succumb to his quiet charm Scott discovers Mia’s wild sexual nature is not restricted to the dance floor. As he struggles to keep up with her sexual prowess and ever changing moods Scott discovers a side of himself that he had not deemed possible. Pleasing Mia is by no means an easy accomplishment. Will Scott succeed?


  1. Wow he's got it bad for her. And what's up with Mia, pay attention to the guy, silly woman!

  2. Nice to see a man struck with dithers and angst and Scott has both for Mia.

  3. Well, she has him tied up in knots. Great to see!

  4. Poor, confused Scott. Maybe he should just sleep through the day because his nights sound pretty damn good. lol. Looking forward to more!

  5. I feel sorry for Scott, indeed! Though I wonder what's going through Mia's mind. Sounds like she's thinking pretty hard about something... But she's not sharing what it is!

  6. Poor Scott! And I wonder what's going in with Mia, why she's so distant?? I'll be back for more.

    Good 8, Gemma. :-)