Hi and welcome to this week's Eight sentences. As Valentine's day will soon be upon us I thought I would share 8 from 'Pleasing Mia', it's a story of one man's quest to be with the woman he loves.
My Eight
Sunlight beamed through the pale
roller blind adorning Scott’s small bedroom window and cast a warm ray on to
Mia’s golden hair. Scott woke sleepily and glancing
down, noticed that they had hardly moved all night. Mia was still lying
with her head on his chest. With her arm wrapped around him, she looked just
like a sleeping angel.
Scott glanced across
to the alarm clock. It showed 8:30a m. He wondered briefly if she had to go to
work and realised once again that he still knew very little about her. He
wanted to make her coffee but knew that to do that he would have to disturb
her.
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Synopsis:
On
a weekend visit to a local nightclub, Scott, a quiet, good looking man, sets his
eyes on a beautiful girl dancing with complete abandonment on the dance floor.
Everybody is watching her, though she seems oblivious to any attention she is
receiving. The girl (Mia) is simply lost in the music.
When eventually circumstances lead
her to succumb to his quiet charm Scott discovers Mia’s wild sexual nature is
not restricted to the dance floor. As he struggles to keep up with her sexual
prowess and ever changing moods Scott discovers a side of himself that he had
not deemed possible. Pleasing Mia is by no means an easy accomplishment. Will
Scott succeed?
He's got it bad! He's half in love with this girl already. The cover is beautiful, BTW.
ReplyDeleteLovely snippet.
ReplyDeleteGreat job showing how much he's already fallen for this woman, but how little he truly knows about her. Nice excerpt!
ReplyDeleteGood man, this Scott. Maybe he'll think of something else to do beside making coffee.
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet, tender scene.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet. Lovely snippet.
ReplyDeleteSuch an intimate scene. To wake her and risk her leaving or... Great 8!
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet scene. I'd vote for something else besides coffee, too.
ReplyDeleteAnd the fact he knows so little about her adds to MY tension inagoodway. Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteCoffee? Later. :) There's much more important things to take care of. lol
ReplyDeleteNew Cover? It's lovely. :) I always feel his love for her and that's so much fun to read.
ReplyDeleteThanks SJ, this cover is on other sites apart from Amazon, glad you like it! :)
DeleteThat was so sweet and romantic. He doesn't want to move. I loved it!
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Thank you everyone for your lovely comments :)
ReplyDeletePerfect choice for the month of love. This is a sweet snippet, Gemma. Good 8! :-)
ReplyDeleteHe's so sweet! And, according to the premise, in for the time of this life! :D
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful man. Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThis is one time where coffee can wait : )
ReplyDeleteLove the description of the light from the blinds. If she's a must-have-my-coffee drinker, he might be better off making it anyway...
ReplyDeleteNice morning tableau
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