Sunday 2 February 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors #54



Hi and welcome to this week's Eight sentences. As Valentine's day will soon be upon us I thought I would share 8 from 'Pleasing Mia', it's a story of one man's quest to be with the woman he loves.

My Eight

Sunlight beamed through the pale roller blind adorning Scott’s small bedroom window and cast a warm ray on to Mia’s golden hair. Scott woke sleepily and glancing down, noticed that they had hardly moved all night. Mia was still lying with her head on his chest. With her arm wrapped around him, she looked just like a sleeping angel.
Scott glanced across to the alarm clock. It showed 8:30a m. He wondered briefly if she had to go to work and realised once again that he still knew very little about her. He wanted to make her coffee but knew that to do that he would have to disturb her.   

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Synopsis:
On a weekend visit to a local nightclub, Scott, a quiet, good looking man, sets his eyes on a beautiful girl dancing with complete abandonment on the dance floor. Everybody is watching her, though she seems oblivious to any attention she is receiving. The girl (Mia) is simply lost in the music.
When eventually circumstances lead her to succumb to his quiet charm Scott discovers Mia’s wild sexual nature is not restricted to the dance floor. As he struggles to keep up with her sexual prowess and ever changing moods Scott discovers a side of himself that he had not deemed possible. Pleasing Mia is by no means an easy accomplishment. Will Scott succeed?








20 comments:

  1. He's got it bad! He's half in love with this girl already. The cover is beautiful, BTW.

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  2. Great job showing how much he's already fallen for this woman, but how little he truly knows about her. Nice excerpt!

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  3. Good man, this Scott. Maybe he'll think of something else to do beside making coffee.

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  4. Such an intimate scene. To wake her and risk her leaving or... Great 8!

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  5. What a sweet scene. I'd vote for something else besides coffee, too.

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  6. And the fact he knows so little about her adds to MY tension inagoodway. Excellent excerpt!

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  7. Coffee? Later. :) There's much more important things to take care of. lol

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  8. New Cover? It's lovely. :) I always feel his love for her and that's so much fun to read.

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    1. Thanks SJ, this cover is on other sites apart from Amazon, glad you like it! :)

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  9. That was so sweet and romantic. He doesn't want to move. I loved it!
    The Murders of Polly Frisch

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  10. Thank you everyone for your lovely comments :)

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  11. Perfect choice for the month of love. This is a sweet snippet, Gemma. Good 8! :-)

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  12. He's so sweet! And, according to the premise, in for the time of this life! :D

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  13. What a wonderful man. Lovely :)

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  14. This is one time where coffee can wait : )

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  15. Love the description of the light from the blinds. If she's a must-have-my-coffee drinker, he might be better off making it anyway...

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