Sunday 30 August 2015

Weekend Writing Warriors #121

 

Hi and welcome to this week's eight sentences. 
I'm continuing with the next eight from 'Dancing for the Boys' enjoy!:                                           
   MY EIGHT

Slowly Tanya pulled herself up to her feet and bowed low to the grinning men.

Somebody ushered the guests from the room but James remained. He walked slowly towards her, dampness on his upper lip.

“You were amazing.” he breathed.

Tanya smiled but her eyes revealed her hunger. This time James noticed. He sighed, glancing towards the door regretfully.

“I need to go,” he said, “But I would like you to stay, can you do that?”

Tanya nodded, she was still trembling from the power of her performance, her heart beat wildly and her body pulsed excitement.

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Who doesn’t love to dance? Who doesn’t love to tease the men watching, willing them to notice and lust after your body? What would you do if you were given the chance to perform before a group of appreciative gentlemen for a large amount of money? The latest release from the pen of Gemma Parkes combines two stories of exotic dancing and what it means to two women when they truly perform.

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14 comments:

  1. Just when I thought. . .well maybe she'll stay but for what? This snippet is intriguing.

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    1. Yes, he's an intriguing man ;) thanks for commenting

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  2. Love it! Your such a visual writer! Great snippet. I just want to strangle James and make him take that next step already!
    My only suggestion would be to check point of view. Going by the last paragraph I think we're in Tanya's pov, but you describe her eyes revealing her hunger, which she can't see herself. She can see James' response, but not her own eyes. Just a thought:).

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    1. Thank you Tina, that's a very good point and one I'll need to watch :)

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  3. Hope he takes this to the next level!

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  4. Well this scene is heating up nicely!

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  5. Ooh, making progress on the personal front, getting him to notice her interest! Enjoyed the excerpt...

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  6. Ha, mission accomplished! Hope he isn't gone for long...

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  7. She's really caught his attention now!

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  8. Lots of sexual tension. Nice snippet.

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  9. It's a heady power to elicit that kind of reaction. Nice scene, you make us feel her satisfaction.

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