Sunday 29 March 2015

Weekend Writing Warriors #107

 



Hi and welcome to this week's eight sentences. 
I'm continuing with the next eight from 'Dancing for the Boys' enjoy!:                                           
   MY EIGHT



“I think that you are an excellent pole dancer,” James continued seemingly oblivious to Tanya’s wandering stare. “I have a proposition for you if you are interested.”

That caught Tanya’s attention and she raised her eyes to meet his. A deep blue intensity greeted her making her falter all over again.
“What sort of proposition?” she managed.
James glanced across at Tony, so obviously listening though pretending he wasn’t.
“We can’t talk here,” he said, “Would you object to going somewhere more private?”
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Who doesn’t love to dance? Who doesn’t love to tease the men watching, willing them to notice and lust after your body? What would you do if you were given the chance to perform before a group of appreciative gentlemen for a large amount of money? The latest release from the pen of Gemma Parkes combines two stories of exotic dancing and what it means to two women when they truly perform.

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11 comments:

  1. Uh oh. Private? Might be tough to keep their minds on business. :-) That might not be all bad... lol

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  2. This gets more and more interesting. Mother's instinct is for her to use caution.

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  3. Uh oh -- a place more private and he already has her out of her comfort zone? Uh oh :-) Great eight Gemma, as usual! You certainly bring the scenes to life!

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  4. Oh my! More and more intriguing. I'm curious to see if she goes with him and to find out what his proposition is;). Great 8.

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  5. Love the interaction! Just enough to leave us wanting more. ;)

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  6. I love the way you've set this up. There's great tension here. I'd be torn between curiosity and wariness.

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  7. I think she's going to be disappointed, this sounds very business-like to me.

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  8. It does sound business-like, but the way he looks at her makes me think it might be more.

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  9. She'd better watch her back. Proposition can be such a loaded word. Great 8 for getting me interested.

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  10. I want to know what his proposition is!! Great frustrating 8. lol

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  11. Uh oh, I'm concerned for her! Enjoying this story and the twists and turns. Great snippet!

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