Sunday, 15 March 2015

Weekend Writing Warriors #105

 



Hi and welcome to this week's eight sentences. 
I'm sharing eight from 'Dancing for the Boys' enjoy!:                                           
   MY EIGHT

Tanya blushed as she became acutely aware of the towel wrapped around her and the damp curls framing her make up free face.
“I didn’t realise you would be…getting changed.” he purred scanning her swiftly up and down. “I am sorry; would you meet me in the small bar when you are ready?”
Tanya had an urge to pull him inside, she wanted him to push past her and lock the door. Silently, she nodded meekly and watched as he walked away. She reapplied make up and brushed her hair as quickly as she could. Then she donned the simple dress she had arrived in and headed nervously down to the small bar.
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Who doesn’t love to dance? Who doesn’t love to tease the men watching, willing them to notice and lust after your body? What would you do if you were given the chance to perform before a group of appreciative gentlemen for a large amount of money? The latest release from the pen of Gemma Parkes combines two stories of exotic dancing and what it means to two women when they truly perform.

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9 comments:

  1. Jess Schira15 March 2015 at 10:33

    I love how this snippet makes getting dressed and primped feel like putting on battle armor. Nice job, Gemma!

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  2. Cara Bristol15 March 2015 at 11:25

    I can imagine her nervousness in this situation.

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  3. Charmaine Gordon15 March 2015 at 13:26

    There's a genteel feeling about the man. You've fleshed out a difficult moment and brought it to life. Wonderful.

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  4. Daryl Devoré15 March 2015 at 14:40

    Great scene. The nakedness she felt was obvious.

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  5. Unknown15 March 2015 at 14:43

    She might have welcomed something else, but I like that he retreated in this situation. It makes me like him a lot more:)

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  6. Sara Harris15 March 2015 at 17:31

    Great tension between the two! Her defenses are down a bit . . . there is something special about this man. Great job Gemma!

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  7. Anonymous15 March 2015 at 17:37

    Fun snippet. I'm with Eleri, I'm glad he didn't take advantage. And the anticipation builds...

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  8. Veronica Scott15 March 2015 at 18:03

    He certainly seems like a gentleman so far - this is going to be a very interesting conversation, I have no doubt. Great snippet!

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  9. Teresa Cypher15 March 2015 at 19:28

    I agree with Eleri--and Veronica. He's got potential ;-) Good 8, Gemma! :-)

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