Sunday, 1 March 2015

Weekend Writing Warriors #103


Hi and welcome to this week's eight sentences. 
I'm sharing eight from 'Dancing for the Boys' enjoy!:                                           

Tanya had them captivated, she twisted, she turned and she spread her long legs wide then twisted them back into herself with her arms taking her weight. The neon outfit glowed in the dim lighting leaving little to the imagination. Tanya was on fire, timing her twists to the beat of the music and holding every carefully placed position long enough to whet the appetite of every male in the club. She spun around the pole holding on by one hand in a move few attempted then snaked to the floor to rapturous applause. With her final bow Tanya looked to the right, but her admirer wasn’t there.
With the shouts for more ringing in her ears Tanya headed for her dressing room. Her body buzzed with excitement but her heart felt bereft. Why hadn’t he stayed to watch her?

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Who doesn’t love to dance? Who doesn’t love to tease the men watching, willing them to notice and lust after your body? What would you do if you were given the chance to perform before a group of appreciative gentlemen for a large amount of money? The latest release from the pen of Gemma Parkes combines two stories of exotic dancing and what it means to two women when they truly perform.

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  1. I could feel her excitement that became disappointment when the audience she performed for wasn't there. Great snippet!

  2. Your dance scenes are really detailed. Not easy to do at all. Love this weeks 8

  3. Fantastic descriptions. I could see the dance and feel her excitement, and the disappointment rang through loud and clear.

  4. Excellent descriptive details, Gemma! And I felt her disappointment. Wonder why he left? :-)

  5. Marvelous description of the dancing and then the big let down. Just right to keep us wanting more!

  6. Oh, I feel sad for her. Nice image of her snaking down the pole.

  7. This guy definitely knows how to catch her attention... The more he displays his skill at it, the more I wonder what he wants.

  8. Fabulous description. And I'm with Tanya, I want to know why he left;). Great 8.

  9. I have the same question - where is he??? The description of her routine was excellent, really easy to visualize, based on your words. Great 8!