Sunday 10 November 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors #42


Welcome to this week's eight sentences! Another eight from 'Patrick's Pendant' a story within Yellow Silk Dream's anthology 'Enchanted'. This week I am continuing from where we left off, enjoy!:


My Eight:

Feeling suddenly light headed Katie closed her eyes, and leaned against the nearest tree for support. She held the coin tentatively between thumb and forefinger.
Her head continued spinning and a soft humming sound began in her ears. It wasn’t unpleasant; instead she found it soothing, almost melodic, and her body felt light and free of tension. Katie found thoughts flowed from her mind leaving her tranquil and contented.
She could see him!
A young man with sandy blonde hair and the brightest of blue eyes appeared in her minds eye. He was dressed casually in faded jeans and an old grey T shirt.
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16 comments:

  1. Sometimes 8 isn't enough. Fascinating. I'm wishing to keep reading.

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  2. Who is he? Great 8. I can't wait to find out.

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  3. I relaxed just reading the snippet - such beautifully chosen words to create the mood! Excellent excerpt...

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  4. This was so lovely. Eight sentences too few...

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  5. lovely scene - but who is the boy?

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  6. oh man you sure know how to leave it where it's getting good! I can't wait to see what happens next week. Love how you described him!

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  7. You pulled me in, Gemma. I feel like I'm spinning with her. This story is definitely intriguing. Well done.

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  8. Who is this guy? I'm intrigued. :) Enjoyed the 8.

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  9. Sounds like quite an experience she's having! I can almost feel it along with her, it's so well described. :)

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  10. Nice! It is a magic pendant? Good snippet, Gemma!:-)

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  11. The man of her dreams? Great description passage. I could feel her head spinning!

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  12. Wonderful description throughout this scene! Can't wait to hear more about this guy. Well done, Gemma! :)

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  13. Uh oh. What's happened to Patrick that he's no longer of this world? Great eight!

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  14. Nice dream, I wonder who is the guy.

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