Sunday, 10 November 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors #42


Welcome to this week's eight sentences! Another eight from 'Patrick's Pendant' a story within Yellow Silk Dream's anthology 'Enchanted'. This week I am continuing from where we left off, enjoy!:


My Eight:

Feeling suddenly light headed Katie closed her eyes, and leaned against the nearest tree for support. She held the coin tentatively between thumb and forefinger.
Her head continued spinning and a soft humming sound began in her ears. It wasn’t unpleasant; instead she found it soothing, almost melodic, and her body felt light and free of tension. Katie found thoughts flowed from her mind leaving her tranquil and contented.
She could see him!
A young man with sandy blonde hair and the brightest of blue eyes appeared in her minds eye. He was dressed casually in faded jeans and an old grey T shirt.
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16 comments:

  1. Heather Boyd10 November 2013 at 09:02

    Sometimes 8 isn't enough. Fascinating. I'm wishing to keep reading.

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  2. Anonymous10 November 2013 at 15:28

    Who is he? Great 8. I can't wait to find out.

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  3. Charmaine Gordon10 November 2013 at 16:27

    Delicious well written eight.

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  4. Veronica Scott10 November 2013 at 16:44

    I relaxed just reading the snippet - such beautifully chosen words to create the mood! Excellent excerpt...

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  5. Unknown10 November 2013 at 17:27

    This was so lovely. Eight sentences too few...

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  6. sue10 November 2013 at 17:41

    lovely scene - but who is the boy?

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  7. Lauren10 November 2013 at 18:00

    oh man you sure know how to leave it where it's getting good! I can't wait to see what happens next week. Love how you described him!

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  8. Cara Bristol10 November 2013 at 18:52

    Nice mood you've created.

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  9. S.J. Maylee10 November 2013 at 19:24

    You pulled me in, Gemma. I feel like I'm spinning with her. This story is definitely intriguing. Well done.

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  10. Karen Michelle Nutt10 November 2013 at 22:48

    Who is this guy? I'm intrigued. :) Enjoyed the 8.

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  11. Anonymous10 November 2013 at 23:09

    Sounds like quite an experience she's having! I can almost feel it along with her, it's so well described. :)

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  12. Teresa Cypher11 November 2013 at 02:04

    Nice! It is a magic pendant? Good snippet, Gemma!:-)

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  13. Debbie D. 11 November 2013 at 02:26

    The man of her dreams? Great description passage. I could feel her head spinning!

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  14. Unknown11 November 2013 at 11:55

    Wonderful description throughout this scene! Can't wait to hear more about this guy. Well done, Gemma! :)

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  15. Unknown11 November 2013 at 16:45

    Uh oh. What's happened to Patrick that he's no longer of this world? Great eight!

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  16. Linda11 November 2013 at 17:45

    Nice dream, I wonder who is the guy.

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