Sunday, 27 July 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors #76

            Hi and welcome to this week's Eight sentences. Today I am continuing with eight from my new release, 'Fevered Kisses' an anthology of lust. This week I am continuing with the second story 'Too Darn Hot' carrying on from where we left off last time:

                                                       MY EIGHT:
Jamie looked around at the obvious affluence. He wondered for the first time whether or not she lived here alone. A temptation came over him to follow Miranda, the sun always made him horny and he was sure the invitation wasn’t only to swim. Instead he went out to the pool house and found several pairs of swim shorts in a variety of styles and colours. As he held up a navy pair he wondered how many men Miranda brought here.
When he was ready he climbed straight in to the pool swimming two lengths quickly in an attempt to cool himself down. Miranda watched him for a moment from an upstairs window. He was a sight to behold, those broad shoulders and strong arms cutting through the water while his long legs stretched out behind him.


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 Six sizzling stories in an anthology of lust from the pen of Gemma Parkes:
·        A notebook carelessly left behind reveals secret liaisons of a most intimate nature.
·        An insatiable woman bites off far more than she can chew when four is certainly not a crowd.
·        Sometimes life is just too darn hot but could cooling down heat things up further?
·        Fevered kisses lead to daring thrills for one hungry couple.
Also, what happens when erotic fantasies occupy too much of your time? Lay back and lose yourself in the sensual mind of one of England’s most imaginative storytellers. Adults only.

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  1. Oh, so she likes to peek : ) Sounds like a pretty nice view.

  2. Is there anything better than ogling a man swimming laps? Great 8. :)

  3. I am with Heather and Millie, nothing better than being able to ogle a man who looks good in swim trunks;). Great 8.

  4. I can think of a few better things but let's begin with ogling. Terrific scene. You've captured my interest, Gemma. Excellent writing.

  5. I'd be wondering, too, if I saw all those swim trunks! But if he wants what she does, it doesn't really matter if she's invited other men over before, right?

    She could've suggested skinny dipping, though. ;)

  6. Yep. What they all said. lol. Who wouldn't indulge in a nice view. Good snippet, Gemma!

  7. I like the snippet but it seems to have a mixed POV. His first and then hers at the end. I would just stick with his. Otherwise, fantastic and very intriguing. I'm wondering, as he is, exactly what he's in for. :D

  8. Will be interesting to see how the scene develops and if he keeps that self control. Great snippet!

  9. This scene definitely has possibilities for mutual heating up and cooling off. :)
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  10. If I saw a plethora of swim wear, I'd wonder how many men she brought over too.

  11. Mmmm, the only thing I love more than a man in swim trunks is a wet man in swim trunks. :D Fabulous scene, Gemma!