tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post1010414809030246426..comments2023-10-21T10:57:21.619+01:00Comments on Gemma Parkes: Living and Loving with A Passion!: Weekend Writing Warriors #76gemma parkeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-58214752002475321562014-07-28T03:16:02.205+01:002014-07-28T03:16:02.205+01:00Mmmm, the only thing I love more than a man in swi...Mmmm, the only thing I love more than a man in swim trunks is a wet man in swim trunks. :D Fabulous scene, Gemma! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-74243758452473914302014-07-28T02:40:46.325+01:002014-07-28T02:40:46.325+01:00If I saw a plethora of swim wear, I'd wonder h...If I saw a plethora of swim wear, I'd wonder how many men she brought over too.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-32582282730667324092014-07-28T01:59:33.531+01:002014-07-28T01:59:33.531+01:00This scene definitely has possibilities for mutual...This scene definitely has possibilities for mutual heating up and cooling off. :)<br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">History Sleuth's Milk Carton Murders</a><br />HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-25522672470872607102014-07-28T00:28:55.425+01:002014-07-28T00:28:55.425+01:00Will be interesting to see how the scene develops ...Will be interesting to see how the scene develops and if he keeps that self control. Great snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-50578644365593558072014-07-27T22:14:52.598+01:002014-07-27T22:14:52.598+01:00I like the snippet but it seems to have a mixed PO...I like the snippet but it seems to have a mixed POV. His first and then hers at the end. I would just stick with his. Otherwise, fantastic and very intriguing. I'm wondering, as he is, exactly what he's in for. :DLisa Medleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02292293577788930873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-66041115714912403422014-07-27T22:05:39.864+01:002014-07-27T22:05:39.864+01:00Yep. What they all said. lol. Who wouldn't ind...Yep. What they all said. lol. Who wouldn't indulge in a nice view. Good snippet, Gemma! Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-86437009367311781562014-07-27T22:02:46.420+01:002014-07-27T22:02:46.420+01:00I'd be wondering, too, if I saw all those swim...I'd be wondering, too, if I saw all those swim trunks! But if he wants what she does, it doesn't really matter if she's invited other men over before, right?<br /><br />She could've suggested skinny dipping, though. ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-70256860263710307162014-07-27T18:00:36.915+01:002014-07-27T18:00:36.915+01:00I can think of a few better things but let's b...I can think of a few better things but let's begin with ogling. Terrific scene. You've captured my interest, Gemma. Excellent writing.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-580060472580969812014-07-27T17:52:33.567+01:002014-07-27T17:52:33.567+01:00I am with Heather and Millie, nothing better than ...I am with Heather and Millie, nothing better than being able to ogle a man who looks good in swim trunks;). Great 8.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-29504810742812034972014-07-27T09:50:35.581+01:002014-07-27T09:50:35.581+01:00Is there anything better than ogling a man swimmin...Is there anything better than ogling a man swimming laps? Great 8. :)Heather Boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12522336655445579477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-56886323178823715772014-07-27T07:34:10.461+01:002014-07-27T07:34:10.461+01:00Oh, so she likes to peek : ) Sounds like a pretty...Oh, so she likes to peek : ) Sounds like a pretty nice view.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.com