Sunday, 11 May 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors #68

Hi and welcome to this week's Eight sentences. Today I am continuing with eight from my new release, 'Fevered Kisses' an anthology of lust. This week I am moving on to the second story 'Too Darn Hot' starting at the beginning enjoy!:


It’s too darn hot, just too darn hot”
The music rang out for a third time as eight couples quick stepped their way past Miranda Briggs as they had done all afternoon.
“OK, everyone let’s take five!” She shouted waving her hand high in the direction of the MC and standing up swiftly from her chrome and leather chair.
The music stopped and the couples left the floor in their droves as Miranda headed towards the bar.
“What time is it Jamie?” she asked the bar tender. He was a young man around 26 at least ten years Miranda’s junior, handsome in the extreme, tall and lithe.

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 Six sizzling stories in an anthology of lust from the pen of Gemma Parkes:
·        A notebook carelessly left behind reveals secret liaisons of a most intimate nature.
·        An insatiable woman bites off far more than she can chew when four is certainly not a crowd.
·        Sometimes life is just too darn hot but could cooling down heat things up further?
·        Fevered kisses lead to daring thrills for one hungry couple.
Also, what happens when erotic fantasies occupy too much of your time? Lay back and lose yourself in the sensual mind of one of England’s most imaginative storytellers. Adults only.

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  1. I'm intrigued by the bartender. Am I supposed to be focusing on him?

    1. Yes Cara he's worth focusing on! Thanks for your comment!

  2. Interesting beginning - I love dancing and I'm wondering what's going to happen next. Fun snippet!

    1. Thanks Veronica, glad you liked it.

  3. A lady in control of the action, and a younger attractive man... I have some guesses to where this is going! ;)

  4. Nice descriptions. I'm especially intrigued by the bartender. :)

  5. Hmm. Will she find the bartender as delicious as I image? Nice.

  6. Yes Jamie, what time is it? Methinks it's time for some cooling down at the bar ; )

  7. I love any scene that involves dancing! Can't wait to see what the bartender's story is. Great start! :)

  8. Well, I'm pretty intrigued by Jamie's description! This beginning is definitely a hook as far as I'm concerned!