Sunday, 12 April 2015

Weekend Writing Warriors #109

 
Hi and welcome to this week's eight sentences. 
I'm continuing with the next eight from 'Dancing for the Boys' enjoy!:                                           
   MY EIGHT

 
“A private dance?” Tanya asked.
“Well, not entirely private. I want you to dance in my home for a group of business men I am trying to impress.” James continued.
Tanya felt a twinge of disappointment, her fantasies had all been for his eyes only.
“Would you be there?” she asked trying not to show the longing in her eyes.
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Who doesn’t love to dance? Who doesn’t love to tease the men watching, willing them to notice and lust after your body? What would you do if you were given the chance to perform before a group of appreciative gentlemen for a large amount of money? The latest release from the pen of Gemma Parkes combines two stories of exotic dancing and what it means to two women when they truly perform.

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6 comments:

  1. Gem Sivad12 April 2015 at 14:31

    I'm disappointed that he doesn't realize she'd been dancing just for him. And more than a little worried about her performance for a group of men. Great snippet.

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  2. Karen Michelle Nutt12 April 2015 at 15:48

    Well that had to be a real let down. I do hope it will turn around. Kinda wondering why he wants her to perform for a group of men. Can't wait to find out more.

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  3. Sara Harris12 April 2015 at 16:51

    Great cliffhangers for the last few weeks, Gemma. She wants him, but doesn't want him to know it. He is gauging her responses . . . LOVE IT! Such suspense!

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  4. Anonymous12 April 2015 at 17:46

    Great emotional impact in this snippet. Shows how focused she is on him and him alone.

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  5. Daryl Devoré12 April 2015 at 18:17

    Probably very hard for her to hide her disappointment. I hope he notices.

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  6. Teresa Cypher13 April 2015 at 00:24

    Awe, I was hoping it was a private dance for just him. The waiting to dance in private for him will be such sweet tension building. :-) lol

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