Sunday, 29 June 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors #72

            Hi and welcome to this week's Eight sentences. Today I am continuing with eight from my new release, 'Fevered Kisses' an anthology of lust. This week I am continuing with the second story 'Too Darn Hot' carrying on from where we left off last time:

                                                       MY EIGHT:
It was almost two hours before Miranda finally managed to wrap things up for the day, the medals were coming up so the dancers were full of questions taking much more of her time than Miranda was happy to give.
With a wave of her hand she handed a note to Jamie, it contained her scribbled address.
“Oh thanks Miranda.” Jamie looked crestfallen.
“I thought you wanted to swim?” Miranda asked.

“I do, l really do it’s just that my cars in the garage.” Jamie hurried.
Miranda paused for a moment to decipher whether or not this was the case or if Jamie was merely trying to avoid going home with her. 


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 Six sizzling stories in an anthology of lust from the pen of Gemma Parkes:
·        A notebook carelessly left behind reveals secret liaisons of a most intimate nature.
·        An insatiable woman bites off far more than she can chew when four is certainly not a crowd.
·        Sometimes life is just too darn hot but could cooling down heat things up further?
·        Fevered kisses lead to daring thrills for one hungry couple.
Also, what happens when erotic fantasies occupy too much of your time? Lay back and lose yourself in the sensual mind of one of England’s most imaginative storytellers. Adults only.

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  1. Hmm, sounds a bit like I'm washing my hair excuse...

  2. Very interested to see where things go from here. Great snippet, Gemma! :)

  3. It does sound like avoidance but ??? Great tease.

  4. Hmm...Make me wonder, too. Interesting snippet.

  5. Your writing is flawless, Gemma. This snippet leaves me wondering why he looked crestfallen. Good 8. :-)

  6. Conflicting signals all right, can't wait to see what happens next! Another great 8!

  7. Great excerpt. thanks for sharing.

  8. There's definitely something more going on here. Well done, Gemma.

  9. Only one way to find out--ask if he wants a ride over to that pool. If he says he couldn't impose or makes some other excuse, then she'll know. Maybe he really is sad his car's out of commission and he can't drive over.

  10. I went back and read the previous post. I'm wondering why he acting reluctant when he appeared interested before. Intriguing.

  11. Huh. I'm voting for the car really not working rather than reluctance to go.

  12. You've left us wondering and that's good. I'll tune in next week. Intriguing eight, Gemma.

  13. Love that hitch of uncertainty at the end. I want to know what he's thinking!