Sunday, 1 June 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors #70

                                                  


Hi and welcome to this week's Eight sentences. Today I am continuing with eight from my new release, 'Fevered Kisses' an anthology of lust. This week I am continuing with the second story 'Too Darn Hot' carrying on from where we left off last week:

       MY EIGHT:

Miranda told him of the pool with its beautiful azure flooring and the pretty chairs decorating the edge.
“Sounds perfect,” Jamie said when she’d finished, “Wish l had a pool to go home too.”
Miranda eyed him carefully. Jamie was a former pupil and still danced the quarterly supadances whenever they were local.
“Why don’t you come round?” she asked casually, “You’re free to use the pool if you like.”
“Seriously Miranda? You don’t mind?” said Jamie grinning broadly flashing those teeth.

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Synopsis:


 Six sizzling stories in an anthology of lust from the pen of Gemma Parkes:
·        A notebook carelessly left behind reveals secret liaisons of a most intimate nature.
·        An insatiable woman bites off far more than she can chew when four is certainly not a crowd.
·        Sometimes life is just too darn hot but could cooling down heat things up further?
·        Fevered kisses lead to daring thrills for one hungry couple.
Also, what happens when erotic fantasies occupy too much of your time? Lay back and lose yourself in the sensual mind of one of England’s most imaginative storytellers. Adults only.

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18 comments:

  1. He appears to have talked his way into the pool area...wondering how much deeper he'll get. ;)

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  2. Good snippet and I agree with Gem and deeper he'll get in her pool. 'those' teeth? Consider 'flashed a bright smile.' or if you're really into teeth, 'a toothy smile.'

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  3. Hi Charmaine thanks for commenting. The line is 'those teeth' because I'd mentioned them and how bright they were just a few lines before! Sometimes it's hard to get the context when only 8 sentences are shown. Thanks for stopping by.

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  4. Enjoyed the snippet. Sound like he's a smooth talker... Can't wait for more.

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    1. Thanks Karen, he certainly is (and quite a looker too!)

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  5. Oh! Intriguing setup, Gemma. I've missed your writing. :)

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    1. Thanks SJ, missed yours too, good to see you back!

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  6. O_o what is this invitation going to lead to, I wonder? Great snippet and setup!

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    1. Thanks Veronica, glad you enjoyed it!

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    1. Naughty, rich, bored lady! Thanks for commenting Millie!

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  8. The pool sounds lovely. Hmm, the use of the word 'casually' makes me wonder if it's her that's making plans, not him.

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    1. Well spotted Caitlin! Thanks for commenting!

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  9. Here's to you Mrs. Robinson...lol. You must like water. I see other water images on your book covers.

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    1. Oh yes, never noticed before, but I am a real water baby! Thanks for commenting Cara!

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    1. She certainly is! Thanks for commenting Elaine :)

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