tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post8411239669191423461..comments2023-10-21T10:57:21.619+01:00Comments on Gemma Parkes: Living and Loving with A Passion!: Weekend Writing Warriors #64gemma parkeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-771166960866376162014-04-14T16:08:24.693+01:002014-04-14T16:08:24.693+01:00Didn't want to give up her seat, didn't re...Didn't want to give up her seat, didn't really want coffee, but... I felt the soggy depression of a rainy day. Well Done!Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-74116637618177597972014-04-14T04:35:34.210+01:002014-04-14T04:35:34.210+01:00Nice details--you can feel the dreary day. Her att...Nice details--you can feel the dreary day. Her attitude definitely makes me wonder if she doesn't actually want to get on the train.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-53100524913277134222014-04-14T01:14:00.819+01:002014-04-14T01:14:00.819+01:00Dawdling over coffee. :-) Wonderful descriptions ...Dawdling over coffee. :-) Wonderful descriptions and lots of information, Gemma. I'm curious what happens next. I think she meets someone. :-) Good 8!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-51251341285090254492014-04-13T23:17:11.221+01:002014-04-13T23:17:11.221+01:00You did a great job of showing the setting in this...You did a great job of showing the setting in this scene. I especially liked the detail about the grubby table that she isn't willing to give up. I'm definitely wondering what happened that day in London when she missed her train!Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-43224303654990891732014-04-13T17:50:58.573+01:002014-04-13T17:50:58.573+01:00Enjoyed the tone of the excerpt and I could really...Enjoyed the tone of the excerpt and I could really feel those fat raindrops! I was right there in the scene, can't wait for more.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-19181214416573250192014-04-13T17:44:09.738+01:002014-04-13T17:44:09.738+01:00Oh the problems with killing a little time...somet...Oh the problems with killing a little time...sometimes you kill too much and lateness ensues! Her mental banter is fun.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-1450714807443605732014-04-13T17:34:10.107+01:002014-04-13T17:34:10.107+01:00Excellent imagery! I was right there with your cha...Excellent imagery! I was right there with your character. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-86044899348875762032014-04-13T16:26:08.485+01:002014-04-13T16:26:08.485+01:00If you carry this sense of detail through more exc...If you carry this sense of detail through more excerpts, you're going to get yourself a bunch of sales, I think!Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-44629807190348607222014-04-13T15:59:55.443+01:002014-04-13T15:59:55.443+01:00Great job of setting the scene!:)Great job of setting the scene!:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-89164597544277996552014-04-13T15:36:35.878+01:002014-04-13T15:36:35.878+01:00The details brought me into the scene and reminded...The details brought me into the scene and reminded me of a time I was waiting for a train in Porto, Portugal. It was raining there too. Great snippet.Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-25291542289070941112014-04-13T14:54:48.205+01:002014-04-13T14:54:48.205+01:00Totally agree with Cara. Details took me right int...Totally agree with Cara. Details took me right into the scene, damp, dreary, pouring rain, mess on table and makes me wonder what happens next. Good eight.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4365081983572417092.post-28358203546673842852014-04-13T14:11:27.742+01:002014-04-13T14:11:27.742+01:00Nicely detailed. Love the way you paint the settin...Nicely detailed. Love the way you paint the setting.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.com