Sunday, 16 September 2012

Six Sentence Sunday #66


Hello everyone and welcome to this week's Six Sentence Sunday. I'm continuing with six from 'Pleasing Mia' my novella with Rebel Ink Press.  In this scene Scott hasn't seen Mia for a few day's after they finally got together for a night of passion:
The following night Scott was watching TV, a dark documentary about mob mentality, when there was a buzz from his intercom. Expecting it to be Sean he pressed the door release and waited for his friend to walk in, preferably with a four pack of premium lager. Instead there was a gentle knock on his inner door, which was repeated when he didn’t move to answer it. Reluctantly Scott rose and opened the door.
Mia stood before him dressed in a skin tight black cat suit, her messy hair tousled into large curls which each chose to go their own way before tumbling provocatively forward over her slight shoulders.
“Hi Scott,” she said brightly, “I’ve brought wine.”
 
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Gemma

15 comments:

  1. Sounds like an even better guest. LOL Great six! :)

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  2. Yeah, I'd be happier to see Mia than Sean any day... ;D Great six!

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  3. Yes! Lucky, Scott. I'm happy for him. Wonder what she has planned?

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  4. Loved the hair description - wonderful!

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  5. She's better than a four pack of lager any day! Love the description of her hair.

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  6. Always nice when a woman drops by unexpectedly! Good six!

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  7. Cat suit? She means business! Fantastic description.

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  8. I like this snippets first paragraph. It does a nice job setting the mood.

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  9. Pretty sure that's better than Premium Lager and a best mate. Interesting six

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  10. I love all the descriptions in here, from what he's watching on TV to how he sees her when she's at his door. Nice six!

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  11. He doesn't sound like he's disappointed.

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  12. I foresee some sexy shenanigans afoot! :-) Great six!

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  13. I foresee some sexy shenanigans! :-) Great six!

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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  14. Much better than lager any day! ;) Fun six, Gemma.

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