
Hello everyone and welcome to another six sentences. This week l am going to give you six from my Rebel Ink Press Novella 'Pleasing Mia'. In these sentences l am describing the nightclub where my two characters meet:
Pulse, with its two dance floors, was the place to be if you were serious about your dancing. Along the edge of the larger of the two dance floors were four podiums. Anyone could use these at any time during the course of the evening if they felt the urge to show off their dancing skills or had too much drink inside them, which filled them with a false sense of bravado. As a result the quality of the podium dancing was unpredictable to say the least.
Tonight two of them bore male dancers, young and erratic, throwing themselves around in an attempt to impress, occasionally checking each other out to make sure they weren’t being outperformed.
The other two podiums had female occupants, one upon each. 
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Gemma
This half sentence-occasionally checking each other out to make sure they weren’t being outperformed-cracked me up. Excellent descriptive writing in this week's six Gemma!
ReplyDeleteThey don't want to be out performed, lol, I so know those kind :) You've set the stage, Gemma.
ReplyDeleteGood description, I could imagine it very clearly.
ReplyDeleteI know a guy like that. Good thing they can't see themselves when they're sober. Nice six
ReplyDeleteExcellent description. Totally felt like I was there. And I love the cover!
ReplyDeleteOoh, congratulations on a Rebel release, Gemma. I hope there are railings around those podiums, or I'm gonna have nightmares about drunk people falling off them and suing. I'll hold my breath till next week. Sweet six :p
ReplyDeleteI want to find out more about the two females and what they get up to. You created a great atmosphere. Fab six!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you described this club. As S.J. said--you've set the stage. I can't wait to see what kind of interaction results in such a setting. And you cover is gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteI could picture the club so easily..enjoyed your six...and love that cover!
ReplyDeleteNice scene and love the vibe!
ReplyDeleteYou described that so well I think I've been in that club. lol Exciting six!
ReplyDeleteI so want that club to be real! Great description of it!
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