Hello everyone and welcome to another six sentences. As promised this week l am going to share something new. My latest release is a short Novella called 'Making Waves' here are six sentences from it:
Mandy raised her hips upwards to meet John’s steady thrusts. The heels of her feet dug into the sand causing little turrets, her arms were stretched out behind her and with her head resting on one side she could taste the salt in the air. It was very late, possibly 1am, there was no-one around to disturb them and the only sound other than John’s rhythmic grunting was the constant roll of the waves.
She knew he was about to come by his change of pace. She felt his body tense momentarily just before he released himself inside her with a loud groan. Seconds later he fell forward onto her and Mandy felt the grains of sand sticking to the small stream escaping from between her legs before John rolled sideways from her body in a satiated state.
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Gemma
That was very inspirational. Hubs and I are going to the beach in June. *cheeky grin* (Loved your six!)
ReplyDeleteOoohh...sex on the beach! Nicely done :)
ReplyDeleteThis (fantastic) six left me conflicted. It feels as through she's not all that into him...hmm... Very intriguing post, Gemma.
ReplyDeletedirty sexy awesomeness, thank you Gemma :)
ReplyDeleteGreat work!!
ReplyDeleteThis six left me conflicted and intrigued. I didn't feel she was that into him, which makes me very curious. Awesome six, Gemma ;-)
ReplyDeletel'm glad you got that from it Eden, that's exactly the impression l'm going for! Thank you!
Deletehate the sand part though - and was she sated as well??
ReplyDeleteGreat six sentences! I just added Making Waves to my wish list.
ReplyDeleteMichelle V
Ooh... I kind of loved that excerpt. She's kind of detached, eh? Wonder if this is the hero for her, after all...
ReplyDeleteDidn't sound like she enjoyed it as much as he did. Wonder what's wrong? Should have been romantic, but she seemed distant. Hope things get better between them.
ReplyDeleteWow, great description, Gemma. But I suspect she isn't that into him if she can focus on all that. Intriguing six. :)
ReplyDeleteUm, she didn't seem to have much fun there. John had better catch a clue or five.
ReplyDeleteTalk about visceral descriptions. The work is in the details here. She's getting a sensory overload, but I'm not sure how much she likes it. Either way, a greatly detailed read.
ReplyDeleteLike the other commenters, I wonder what comes next--pun intended! ;-)Love the beach imagery too.
ReplyDeleteGreat description and I love how you've chosen the beach as the setting. Great six!
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