Thursday, 17 May 2012

Flash fiction Friday #36

Hello Everyone and welcome to Friday! Every friday a group of us get together to write 100 words each about the same picture, here is mine for this week, enjoy!:

                                         ONE TWO THREE, GEL.



"What has she called him?" Jon asked looking at his brother's baby sleeping peacefully in his arms.
"Max," replied Tom, "cute isn't he?"
"Adorable, how often will you see him?"
"Not often enough, Kate says that l'm a bad influence."
"Does she know that you're using him in this advert?"
"Hell no, she hang me up by my balls! Kate hates this stuff."
The camera started rolling; Jon talked about the wonders of a hair gel so pure that it could even be used on babies hair.
"Cut." called the director.
"I wonder if l could get him a spray tan." Tom whispered.


Thank you for stopping by, please leave me a comment so that l know you've been and take the time to visit the other authors taking part this week by clicking on the links below.
Have a great weekend

Gemma 


Bonni Sansom, Muffy Wilson, S.J. Maylee

8 comments:

  1. I think Kate may just be right, Gemma! Cool flash! What a great take on this photo! Well done:) xo

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  2. Wicked! I was drawn in feeling for him, but then winded with the spray tan suggestion. Great flasher

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  3. I agree with Kate, he's a bad influence :)
    Too funny Gemma, hair gel and a spray tan for baby. I'm giggling here. Thank you, fun flash.

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  4. Love it - I bet she would kick his arse and NOOOO he cannot get him a spray tan - well done :)

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  5. Spray tan an infant? Twisted yet it's probably been suggested in an Ad meeting. Great Flash!

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  6. I found this wickedly funny! Fabulous Flasher!

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  7. Sounds like is a bad influence! Nice twist on a sweet photo. Fabulous Flasher.

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  8. OMg, love it....Fantastic flasher.

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