A Sandy Day
"I have had such a wonderful day James!"
"Me too David, incredible."
"This heart that we've made, it makes me feel like we really are two halves of the same whole."
"I feel the same but you know the tide will come in soon, right?"
David looked out towards the sea, only feet away from them now. The names they wrote earlier had already been washed away by small frothy waves.
"Come on David." said James, "Don't worry about it, it's only sand after all."
"What about the sands of time?" David almost whispered.
"They will never run out for us David, l promise."
I hope you enjoyed my short tale, please leave me a comment. The blue link below will take you to all the other wonderful interpretations, go on you know you want to!
Flasher Fiction Friday
Have a great weekend
Gemma
Beautiful Gemma and really well written
ReplyDeleteOh how romantic! I loved that Gemma :)
ReplyDeleteHow sweet!! I guess David is a bit insecure? James did a wonderful thing reassuring him. Loved this flash. So gentle, sweet and detailed. Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteSo sweet and romantic. well written
ReplyDeleteYes, very well written. I can feel David's thoughts. James is a good guy, preparing David for the waves destruction and reassuring him too. Sweet flash.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet, Gemma! It was a wonderful tale of love.
ReplyDeleteTime and Tide Gemma. Good job. Sands will wash away, but love continues. Thanks for the flash.
ReplyDeleteI found this so sad and so sweet! I hope they can weather whatever storm is headed their way.
ReplyDeleteFantastic FFF!
I loved it Gemma
ReplyDeleteVery sweet, really fits the picture
SLira aka Michael mandrake
aw! Sweet!
ReplyDeleteDo I see a little foreshadowing here? Fantastic flasher!
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweetie! Great six.
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