Saturday, 12 November 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

                           


Hello everyone and welcome to another Six Sentences. I'm carrying on with a snippet from my latest release, 'Master Me, Master You'. Picking up the story a little further on:

We walked for a while, he held my hand, which was nice, but he seemed distant. Turning to me after a very quiet 30 minutes he said,
 “Come tomorrow, but wear a looser skirt.”
Then he left. I watched him go, l knew l should have been offended, and l was, but behind the annoyance was an increasing desire to get to know the man. There was something compelling about him, something behind those piercing blue eyes. He just excited me, intrigued me, l don’t know exactly what it was, but l do know l spent forty minutes that evening searching for a skirt that would please him.

Hope you enjoyed it, please leave a comment and click on the above link to find all the other authors participating today!

Gemma

15 comments:

  1. Who hasn't spent at least 40 minutes trying to find/do what would please a particular man? Love how you weave your way into the heart of this budding relationship in only 6 sentences...

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  2. Interesting set up. I'm curious if his reactions to her new skirt will be more electric. Fun six, Gemma. :)

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  3. Well when a guy tells you what to wear, 40 minutes doesn't sound too bad! ;-)

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  4. I love it! That last line made me cackle a bit, I must admit. Great six!

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  5. Yeah, I'd be looking for that skirt, too! Nice Six!

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  6. Great insight into her desire, interwoven with a little caution and excitement about the unknown.

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  7. Awwwesome six! I love the desire underpinning the annoyance. Well written lovely Lady!

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  8. Nice mix of insights from her :-)

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  9. Uh oh Gemma, watch out! Can't wait to see what happens next. Excellent excerpt!

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  10. I love her conflicting thoughts. A great six! :)

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  11. You did a wonderful job showing us her interest. "Something compelling about him..." I think so too!

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  12. I love the insight into her character!

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  13. Love this insight, great job Gemma!

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  14. I'm hooked. Going to get the book right now. Love your indirect way of creating sexual tension.

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