Hi Everyone and welcome to my 16th Six Sentence Sunday. This week l'm using an excerpt from my just finished, part edited, work which has the working title of 'Master Me Master You'.
I don’t know what it was that first attracted him to me. What it was he saw in me, that little something that told him l would be just right for what he had in mind. I didn’t think about this at the time of course, just months later when I’d moved on with my life.
It would be fair to say l wasn’t look for a relationship when Tom approached me. I had been sitting alone in a small cafe, staring into my coffee and thinking about how quiet the streets outside were for a Saturday afternoon.
He just sat down opposite me, which l thought was quite rude of him. Please leave a comment, l would also appreciate your views on the title. Do drop in to the other blogs participating today! Thank you and have a great Sunday!
Gemma
Interesting six, I like her reminiscence when and how they met.
ReplyDeleteHi Gemma this sound very mystereous when will it be finished?
ReplyDeleteRobert
Wonderful six sentences! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!
ReplyDeleteStephanie Adkins http://stephanieadkins.blogspot.com/
Love that it's told from a future perspective. Great teaser.
ReplyDeleteintriguing!
ReplyDeletei like the title, btw :)
Nice way to tease and intrigue :-)
ReplyDeleteNice, simple start.
ReplyDeleteI liked it and I liked her reaction to his determination at the cafe. Nice six, Gemma. :)
ReplyDeleteOh, he's bold! I bet he disrupted her life as well as he disrupted her peace that morning. :c)
ReplyDeleteI like pondering moments in books. It helps give perspective. And I like the title. :)
ReplyDeleteHe must do some quick talking for her not to tell him to get lost. Interested to see how this scene plays out. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteAn intriguing six! :)
ReplyDeleteOh I like the title and the 6!
ReplyDeleteNice job!
I like the voice, the mood of this piece.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing start...nice six.
ReplyDeleteAs for your title...LOVE IT...I was actually going to comment on it before your little blurp about posting our thoughts.
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Great six!!!! I want more right now!
ReplyDeletesometimes surprises are the best!
ReplyDeleteHe is the take charge kind of guy that I like. Nice six!
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